Chapter 1: The Big What If
1 THE BIG WHAT IF
SO HOW DO WE GET this story started? Where do we begin? How do we fill up alllllll those blank pages?
Simple! We start with a question. It’s called The Big What If
What if you woke up one morning and realized you could fly?
What if it turns out the new kid in your class is actually a ghost, and she doesn’t seem to like you very much?
What if a bilingual family starts a friendly contest to see who can go the longest without speaking English?
What if a girl’s dog went missing for several days, and when she finally finds him she discovers he has a whole other family?
The easiest way to start writing a story is to make a list of what-if questions and then pick one. Flip that question into a statement, and you’ve got the beginning of your story. What if I woke up one morning and realized I could fly?
becomes One morning I woke up and realized I could fly. What if a girl’s dog went missing for several days, and when she finally finds him she discovers he has a whole other family?
becomes A girl’s dog goes missing for several days, and when she finally finds him she discovers he has a whole other family.
The what-if question gives you the two things you need to begin a story: a character and a situation.
Let’s give this a try. I like the idea of the girl searching for her dog and discovering that he has a second family. So how can we get this party started?
How about something like this:
The sirens screamed in the distance, and Olivia knew that if she didn’t move fast, she and Max would be trapped in the Schiffers’ front yard, with all those whiny, weirdo Schiffer kids pointing at her like she was some dog thief. But she wasn’t a thief—Max belonged to her, not those horrible, terrible, no-good Schiffers!
It only took a second to scoop Max up and zoom to the street, the wails of the littlest Schiffers chasing them all the way down the block. Olivia had practically hit warp speed and was taking off into the stratosphere when someone flicked the switch on the sirens and everything went quiet. Slowing down to the slowest of sprints, with Max panting in her ear, Olivia looked around. No police anywhere. Had they really been after her in the first place?
Maybe, maybe not, but at least she’d gotten Max away from those horrible Schiffers!
“I’ve got to sit down, pup,” she said before collapsing onto the curb. “I’m too pooped to scoot one step farther. Besides, you and me need to have a chat. You’ve disappeared three times in the last month, and a bunch of times before that. What’s up? Don’t you know how scared I get when you run away? If you’re not careful, some other family is going to snatch you up.”
Olivia stopped. Her brain was circling around a thought like a monkey going after a weasely weasel. “Max!” she gasped. “The Schiffers said you were their dog—and they seemed pretty serious. Do you have a second family, Max?”
She paused again, another terrible thought dawning on her. “Or are we
your second family? Who did you belong to before we rescued you? What’s the story here?”
Max, being a dog, didn’t reply, but he did give Olivia a look that sent chills down her brain plate all the way to her tiniest toenails.
So Olivia goes looking for her dog and realizes he has another family—and not only that, she’s afraid that the other family might be the one Max belonged to first. If that’s the case, does she have to give him up?
So there you have it: the beginning of a story! If I want to know what happens next, I’ll have to keep writing it. Here’s what I want you to notice.
I don’t dump a lot of information into this opening. I don’t tell you how old Olivia is or what she looks like or how many brothers and sisters she has. That information might be important, but it can wait.
Instead of opening the story with lots of information, I start it with somebody doing something
. I start with action. I get things going right away, which is what you should do, too. Throw your protagonist into the pool! Make her fall off her skateboard and roll into a deep, dark hole. He’s giving a knock-kneed speech and drops all of his notecards. She looks into the mirror and discovers she’s invisible. No preambles, no big explanations, nothing but net. Game on, baby!
Okay, I’ll stop now.
Let’s get back to the flying boy and see what’s going on with him.
This morning I woke up and realized I could fly.
The morning started out the same as every morning. The first thing I did was smash the clock-radio alarm with my fist so it would stop making that terrible racket, and then I slowly put my feet on the floor. I sat like that for a second, the way I always do, until I finally forced myself to stand up.
Only this morning I didn’t exactly stand up. I flew up. It was the weirdest thing. One second I’m sitting on the side of my bed, the next second I’m up on the ceiling.
“Josh, your cereal’s getting soggy,” my mom called from the kitchen. “Hurry up and get down here.”
I tried to fly to the ground so I could walk downstairs, but I couldn’t do it. So I flew to the kitchen. When my mom saw me, she started screaming, which freaked me out so bad, I flew to the front door and out of the house. And then I just kept flying.
Again, I start this story with somebody doing something—in this case, flying out of bed. Josh doesn’t know why he can fly, he just can. The question is, where will he fly to and what kind of trouble is he going to get in?
Which brings us to one of the most important things you want to do in the beginning of your story. You want to make your reader supercurious about what happens next.
You want your reader to turn the page.
Okay, let’s do an End-of-the-Chapter Wrap-up for those of you keeping score at home.
FIRST: THE BIG TAKE-HOME
- All you need to start a story is a character and a situation. The beauty of the what-if question is that it gives you both.
- Open your story with somebody doing something.
- Make your reader want to know what happens next.
NEXT: WRITERS, START YOUR ENGINES!
- 1. Make a what-if list. Try to come up with at least ten what-if statements, from the everyday and mundane to the very weird and fantastical.
- 2. Review your list. Pick the what-if question that interests you the most.
- 3. Flip that what-if question and make it a statement.
FINALLY: LET’S WRITE!
- 1. Open your story with an action scene that sets up your protagonist’s situation. To write this opening scene, pretend you’re making a movie. The camera pans in on your protagonist as he’s… doing what? Jumping up and down on a trampoline? Rushing through breakfast because he’s late for the bus? Putting on her space suit? Getting chased by a dog?
- 2. Whatever it is, your character’s doing it, and then suddenly… something happens! He runs blindly toward the bus and runs smack into a bear! A UFO lands on the sidewalk in front of her! He steps into the spaceship and it takes off—without the other astronauts! She waves her wand and the whole world disappears!
You get the picture. Write a scene that gets the story going and makes your reader eager to know what happens next!
Protago-what? If this is a new one for you, let me explain… In this chapter, we met two characters: Olivia and Josh. They’re the main characters in their stories, the stars of their shows.
We call a story’s main character the protagonist
. Some famous protagonists include Harry Potter, Spider-Man, Ramona Quimby, Melody Brooks, Junie B. Jones, Alvin Ho, and Josh and Jordon Bell.
Other terms for protagonist
, central character
, and lead character
The word protagonist
comes from two Greek words—protos
, which means “first in importance,” and agonistes
, which means “actor.” So protagonist
essentially means the most important actor in the story.